ECSTASY
As I walked through my brain, the scattered pictures, broken dreams.
It may be just another day, but to me it's my whole life.
The scent of dissapointment lingers in the air, with a touch of love and a
hint of fear.
I stumble upon a picture of her, but to me it's my whole life.
Outside I hear some music playing, inside here everything goes blank. No
fear, no pain, no heart break or deceit.
Just me alone in my ECSTASY
by Cary
8th Grader
Oak Park, MI |
War
The fighters, rarely destroying themselves,
Who we are.
They fight an enemies body,
The enemies mind.
They fight more than flesh, for more than flesh.
The enemies are misguided, forever destroying their enemies, who we are.
Enemies are different, think different, think wrong.
Fight more than flesh, fight mind.
The motionless crowd.
Green in aspect.
Stare at friend and foe alike
Do they still feel as they did? As we do?
Do they regret their sacrifice.
We all wish they were here, with us, fighting once more by our side
The good men, rarely destroying themselves,
Dying one by one, killing one by one
Given everything.
I want to know.Jerome
12th Grader
St. Cloud, MN |
| Swedish Scent My door was
shut but you showed me the way
No one cared but you did
Like an angle from heaven or spirt above
I thank you for your love
So gentle and caring as I watch myself stare
I'll never forget you even if we're apart
aways forever you'll be in my heart
Jarrod
7th Grader
Lawrence, MA |
| What is Love Love is a
feeling
Deep within your heart.
Caring, Sharing, Trusting,
Knowing you can count....
On one another.
Love is like a dream
The impossible can happen and will.
Love is magical,
A feeling like walking on air.
Love is the willingness to do anything...
Willing to die for the other,
Willing to show your true self.
Love may hurt...
But it's always worth it.
Love is a feeling
Deep within your heart,
That will never go away.
Dedicated to William Donald Jarvis II
Lacey
11th Grader
Arkansas City, KS |
| By the Fire By the fire i'm
nice and cozy
I see that my cheeks are very rosy
sipping my cocoa by the fire
reading my book about " Liar Liar"
Look at my watch it's time for bed
turn on my light
crawl in my blankets and drop my head
Under my blankets I think in my mind
how much fun I could have
in a century of time
My mom comes in and says
"Turn off the light"
and then she adds
"Have a good night."
Michael
6th Grader
Metheun, MA |
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parents and goes on a journey to reach his uncle. When Terry finds out that he is
alone, he decides to build a car out of his dads old car kit. When it is
finished, Terry goes from Cleveland, Ohio to Port land, Oregon to find his distant
uncle. He had never driven before and ends up having to teach himself. Along
the way he meets an extraordinary man named Waylon. Waylon ends up helping Terry to
learn about life. The quality of mercy is not straind;
it droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven upon the place beneath. It is twice
blessed. It blesseth him that gives and him that takes. And Terry opened
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